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The realistic is the scholastic attainment of writing- based, have no equal of achievement bottom, describe easy disorder maladjustment, will meet bottleneck to write not can't cannot write, on the net so many pits, toughens with writing not enough greatly have a relation.The writing that the Yan Lei livings fixs for control to the writing of in the style of antique make type from him it is thus clear that one spot, although to this I am completely inexperienced, press a root not to know an ancient rhyme to have with rhyme now what dissimilarity, also have no courageous read he alone poem phrase, in 《sky 》 the song heel phrase of emergence, show me immediately the heart living a dream, be like to read to arrive now where 《if the star is Chinese 》 in the epic of emergence is similar.《Bury alive An the words is for night 》《hand 》 terrible story like that, it is very high to test degree to author's literalness, probably is also the Yan Lei livings to just have of write.Don't know that the Yan had to once read rare area what Ke Ke wrote hangs to read a story, those stories want him to go fetch to write, good-looking at least 1 times.
The enactment of《line Jian in the sky 》 now be seen is simple, in the future not too may appear the phenomenon of everyone the benefits dog tooth interleave as well, therefore have United States that advertises for simple and direct homeliness in war, if wasn't too many invention creations to break old atmosphere, this kind of United States really thinks of to let me the type compare Greece myth in because of of love the Troy war that lasts a decade.But fall back always can accept for 50 years of, that very thick anti- war details, absolutely be like an old to write of, but the Yan Lei living me to have no so old.However I also have a question, an easy grief but abandon the youth of advertising for the war, how use 14 years, at he at the age of 38 became the military of tallest empire commander-in-chief?
The one who be disgusted with war becomes wars divine of precedent not is have no, and have a the most well-known, that is Yang Wei Li.Chu rests red lack with Yang Wei Li can compare sex, but 《silver English 》with 《 line Jian in the sky 》 has very alike at 1:00.There is Fang tree in Tienchung of fame of "butcher", chase his intergalactic hero in the prime of life"massacre" almost exhausted, big book especially book ruthlessness United States, the Yan Lei livings also in the first 《very hot fire city 》 in 《sky 》 , put to pour a batch of officers and mens, from the disease such as very hot fire Chen Xi Ping arrive quiet such as cold ice six through the fishing.The author is the author of all being of style of writing world, have arbitrary authority, however, if the creation all has been already worked properly to feel, so who weep over for the dead?According to a certain massively explode a theory, the cosmos originates a point, the time and space all whence starts, if give this point some beginnings start a condition, so the scientist isn't difficult to deduce, this point at the right moment develops into this shape in cosmos in nowadays.But, if this point have another beginning to start a condition, the cosmos in nowadays is another appearance.This result can not make the scientist satisfied, because so the cosmos is to originate a certain fortuity, but this builds creation with absolute being is have no distinguishing.Hence I think:The world lived by me will be a certain writer to create?The spring of dangerous Peking inside, this writer never make me infect by non- Dian!Really, in the very hot fire city, the death of the famous general matches historical logic very much, but Be build the main author of thing, should also have one to build thing logic.Hope to mediumly build thing logic according to me, my expectation can see Chu rest red face of republican soldier, appear six through the fishing and Yuan can Xiang, Zheng Zhao and white Wei and purple Liao these people's figure.
Chu rests red compare with Yang Wei Li, lack most of, is a tactical technique.Make reference to write war strategy, in addition to thoughting of Tienchung and the old-timer in Luo Guan, having a person can not leave out, that is Huang Yi.In Luo Guan the art of war of style of writing is finally establishment on the four-wheeler car, at that time again had no long range surveillance, unavoidably lacked the variety of facing the war.Tienchung then not too pays attention to the contrast of absolute strength and sometimes makes me produce the illusion that a person surrounds a group of persons.Huang Yi describes to the war then diverse but change more of, at the exploitation of cloudy or sunny rain snow mountain and stream river lake, fight an intelligence report war to the mental state the spy fights of control, almost arrived the degree for resorting to extreme measures, write particularly movingly towards appearing in the complex war of offending and defending converting, each other growth and decay, .The art of war that the Yan Lei livings describes and see currently is lack degree of heating.For example say, press to say that the empire should have essential Yi road courier station, the south advertises for a soldier to reply to put out, to empire should be an important event how, everywhere get news behind right away fly a horse to urgently report emperors all just reasonable, but fact from soldier of Kui in person arrive emperors all after just make collective report condition of the enemy.And the news spread to emperors all, whole the emperor all also expresses of too dispassion, lack the war preparedness of strategic layer, the text Hou sees the artillery think general situation already settle, think in brief.Write snake the person offend city, feel person of snake clearly the Nu captures the dint to come, but Hua keep on backing, be like the tidewater rise and fall, from here think that the person of snake knows that the art of war doesn't persist doing, isn't enough conviction.The desert writes also hard up for cashly to the war in 《blood and sand 》 , seven soldiers make form and tractor and is like the armored car of small tank, really some suddenly.《Silver English 》 the medium famous general is all that the generosity of spirit is hundred percent.The movie 《New York is black to help 》 , the secret society that writes more than 100 year agos big guy, the critical point between life and death is to greatly have moral integrity.Zhen Li it so identity of person, the demagogy insurrection and then and to the utmost goes to kill, trick makes a surprise attack an enemy before handsome, is some out of accordance with the whole book scenario.
The art of war describes of shortage, the nature will have remediable measure, hence had the invention of war weapon.From the wine that can burn, arrive an explosive artillery armoured vehicle from saving the person's kite, arrive a material and jet accelerator ground flight machine, and can drill a sand and bury the ground that the underground shuttles Luo, and Chu rests red commander-in-chief and pays no attention the printing technique that thoughts of, this invents down all the way, the speed was really astonishing some, I am very at least of surprise:The Yan big uncle was very to isn't invention to become addicted and develop according to this degree, perhaps and downwards is a rules war.In spite of the invention theoretically speaks whether actual, first to the strength for describing of war, may bring negative influence very much.
Probably my critique toward the war and the invention some Kes engrave, but request dimensions for the work of realistic style in 《line Jian in the sky 》 affirmative not ability heel eccentricity Wen Rui An(write to have the weapon to is similar to arms and supplies), magic turned 《hero ambition (have the cold weapon to is evil to turn among them)》 , the cartoon turns of 《looks Monogatari (almost all modern weapons and equipmentses have generation go into)》 wait a comparison.I also hope wide readership and author, can chase this critique of mine and question, regard as concern and support of the biggest degree to this work.
The Cang month of outside article disorderly speech
The Cang month of disorderly speech
□ The month of water 2003
Wildly review Cang for month of a-mutually meet to inebriate to return each time
Mutually meet to inebriate to return each time, talk Cang month its text is necessarily like Chun wine, every time round and drink, drink necessarily to inebriate, not inebriate don't return.The beginning knows Cang for month,beats by dre cheap, is a good friend recommendation, descend a bitterness to look for at the banyan it, through look for not to get, beat not to open, could not see three to rob but eventually get a read.Read, if remaining the Hai bottom has beard to then be to fondle beard to give a deep sigh, strange Zai its text;If remaining there is book in the hand then certainly don't want to put it away, browse repeatedly.Cherish remaining since need not to as well have no book, moving float in the sky in the heart surge of feeling have no the place drain, only leave this text with form Qin Mu, and with together share.
Love most of a:Miserable double-edged sword article 《green jade city 》
Miserable double-edged sword article, the Ji parks desire poor year of.This is the novel is two rightnesses of portrayals of leading roles.Luckily the author gave them the middle age lightly and one by one satisfactory final outcome, otherwise I think that I will be sad for a long time.In fact, Xue Chu Yan and Wei keeps in mind ice originally should just a Nie good luck, lake chivalrous man of a river with the Nie good luck of the deep Gui young girl, because of beauty of meet by chance, finally realize of break up.However the wise and farsighted author arrange a small Yan house to fix a way, again chance and opportunity strangely fits the Xi Wu Jin Jiang's lake, thus with bosom ice again continuous front good luck.Have never arranged them to elope to feel keenly to admire to the author, just think a Gui the Ge young girl is with her how can adapt to a wild jungle life, want necessarily and finally isn't that 2 people are gloomy to break up to would be small Yan of death of a woman.BE more pleased than the small Yan and the bosom ice of satisfactory of at the same time, the feeling is at the deep feeling of the quiet night and breeze brook month.Is a for the love willing the decade is tormented by slight illness, deep feeling goes to medicine to can not make its this present life let go of, either.Calm down night of the medicine is this to make me touched most of, it is her to ignore
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